GRE作文是中国学生比较头痛的，经常准备很多时间最后还是只得到3.5。我之所以得到6分，个人认为我的文风比较淳朴扎实，有科学性，写的思路比较广(正、反、特)，字数也比较多(I800+、A700+)。
In conclusion, the committee's recommendation is ill-founded. To strengthen it the
committee must provide dear evidence that Thomas is in fact an effective teacher--perhaps by
citing student or peer evaluations. The committee must also provide specific evidence of
Thomas' research abilities--perhaps by listing scientific journals that have published the results
of her work. Finally, to better evaluate the argument I would need more information about the
degree to which Thomas is content in her current position and at her current salary, and
whether any other University would be willing to offer her a more attractive employment
package.
Argument 29
The following appeared in a newsletter distributed at a recent political rally.
"Over the past year, the Consolidated Copper Company (CCC) has purchased over one
million square miles of land in the tropical nation of West Fredonia. Mining copper on this land
will inevitably result in pollution and environmental disaster, since West Fredonia is home to
several endangered animal species. But such disaster can be prevented if consumers simply
refuse to purchase products that are made with CCC's copper until the company abandons its
mining plans."
The author of this newsletter excerpt condudes that if consumers refuse to buy products
made with Consolidated Copper Company (CCC) copper the company will eventually abandon
its mining plans in the nation of West Fredonia, thereby preventing pollution and an
"environmental disaster" in that country. To justify this conclusion the author points out that
CCC has recently bought more than a million square miles of land in West Fredonia, and that
West Fredonia is home to several endangered animal species. I find this argument specious
on several grounds.
First, the author provides no evidence that the West Fredonia land that CCC has acquired
amounts to a significant portion of land inhabited by endangered animal species, or that CCC's
land is inhabited by endangered animal species at all. Nor does the author provide clear
evidence that CCC's mining activities are of the type that might cause pollution, the extinction
of animal species, or any other environmental damage. Lacking such evidence the author
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